Game scene wip

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toxigames
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Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Fri Apr 14, 2017 12:40 am

UPDATE: Game scene work in progress. I have worked a bit on some new graphics for my scene and this is so far what I have come up with. Feedback is very welcome :) Ctrl-Click for go to new browser tab with full image at imgur.com

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Game scene work in progress. Click for full image

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby Lazur » Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:21 am

Hi.

The landscape section texture looks too vivid and bright to me, and its overall simplistic style with the trees are in too much contrast with the sprites
-which are nicely detailed, but at this size they are harder to distinguish.
Including the Sun in the scenery might not be a good idea with the blinking lights surrounding.

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Fri Apr 14, 2017 8:56 pm

Thank you Lazur, my idea was to make the important game objects clear to see and detailed so the player can have easy focus on the important stuff, but I can see how it seems off from the landscapes more simple style.

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby BlueKnight » Sun Apr 16, 2017 12:28 am

Very, very cool!

It is looking good, my friend! Keep it up!


Just one little comment:
I think the style of some objects (e.g. the "pipes", and little missiles) are not "talking" perfectly with the scenario, maybe you could think about it.

But I am newbie at this, and I am not as professional as you. It is just my amateur opinion.


Thank you!

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:13 am

oh wow, professional.. Im honestly honored because I consider myself very much an amateur also. Thanks for the feedback, and I do see the point about those smaller sprites being a different style, more detailed, than landscape. I'll have to think about that, perhaps detailing the landscape also.

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Thu May 18, 2017 9:34 pm

UPDATE: Game scene work in progress. I have worked a bit on some new graphics for my scene and this is so far what I have come up with. Feedback is very welcome :) Ctrl-Click for go to new browser tab with full image at imgur.com

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby brynn » Fri May 19, 2017 3:50 am

Oh, the depth and detail is wonderful! Well done!

Hhmm...after some thought. Might need more of a helipcopter than airplane, to navigate the terrain.....?

Edit - Oooh, I know what it reminds me of. Reminds me a little of Roadrunner terrain!

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Fri May 19, 2017 4:37 am

Thank you brynn. And a helicopter yes, that's not a bad idea at all :)

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby BlueKnight » Fri May 19, 2017 12:51 pm

It is looking better now, as brynn said a helicopter would make more sense... But this is just a game.

Very good!

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby toxigames » Sat May 20, 2017 11:12 pm

Thank you BlueKnight! :) I'm thinking about having both a helicopter and a plane. Perhaps helicopter will have more maneuverability but use more fuel, while plane will be faster and use less fuel but with less maneuverability.

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby brynn » Mon May 22, 2017 7:46 am

toxigames wrote:Perhaps helicopter will have more maneuverability but use more fuel, while plane will be faster and use less fuel but with less maneuverability.

I like that idea :D

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Re: Game scene wip

Postby Beta0 » Mon May 22, 2017 10:23 am

The new one seems more easy on the eyes than the first one. Also, the first one had a lot of negative space. Clearly, there's some improvement going on here. You did well. :)


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