Aluminum water bottle- Feedback Please!

Post unfinished work here for feedback and advise.
miloschup
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Aluminum water bottle- Feedback Please!

Postby miloschup » Tue Dec 24, 2013 10:51 am

Hi! This is my first post here, even though I lurk. I've been using inkscape for a while now (with some experience in school using illustrator) and hadn't tried anything like it been.

I'm decently happy with it being one of my first "realistic" creations, but I think it could be improved. Let me know how you think I could best do this :)

Some details: I based the shape off of this picture and I tried to make the rest using my head. It's not as shiny.

Image

Link to svg (couldn't find anywhere to host it well)

Thanks a lot for your time, it's much appreciated :)

Lazur
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Re: Aluminum water bottle- Feedback Please!

Postby Lazur » Fri Dec 27, 2013 8:38 am

Welcome aboard!

The casted shadow is what could be improved largely.
It would be better if you make it from one path only.
And if you draw a geometrically correct shape. The shadow of the cap of the bottle looks way off.

You can use dropbox or inkscapecommunity's gallery to host svg-s.
http://forum.inkscapecommunity.com/index.php

tylerdurden
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Location: Michigan, USA

Re: Aluminum water bottle- Feedback Please!

Postby tylerdurden » Fri Dec 27, 2013 4:51 pm

Nice...

A google image search on: stainless bottle highlights

shows a number of examples for reference on highlights, speculars and shadows.

e.g.:
ImageImageImage

http://www.carolinetiger.com/storage/IM ... 1123751297 (large image)
Have a nice day.

I'm using Inkscape 0.92.2 (5c3e80d, 2017-08-06), 64 bit win8.1

The Inkscape manual has lots of helpful info! http://tavmjong.free.fr/INKSCAPE/MANUAL/html/


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