Amateur Eyes

Post unfinished work here for feedback and advise.
porknwings
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Amateur Eyes

Postby porknwings » Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:31 am

Wish I knew how to do lashes.
Still can't figure out how to get the right glossy effect on the eye.
Don't like the line art around the eye, but like it even less without it.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Image
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3qL7v ... sp=sharing
Not sure why the image doesn't appear...

Lazur
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Re: Amateur Eyes

Postby Lazur » Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:23 am

Hi.

The proportions of the face is off.
https://www.google.com/search?q=face+proportions+drawing&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=Hk0mU6THJuf-ygPUyYCYCA&ved=0CAkQ_AUoAQ&biw=1366&bih=632

Once they are corrected, focus on the basic shape of the eye to enhance your work:
http://tutorialspress.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/traditional_eye_tutorial.jpg

After the basic shapes are right, can come deciding the used style. Without them set good, you won't be able to draw a good character/portrait.


Keep on working on it!


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