M24 tank

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toxigames
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M24 tank

Postby toxigames » Sat Feb 14, 2015 7:34 pm

A green camouflaged tank I made in Inkscape. I'm not sure it's quite finished yet. Modeled after an image of a M24 tank I found on the internetz: http://www.tanksinworldwar2.com/usa-light-tank-m24.php.

I'd like to add a machine gun, and/or some missile launchers to it. Possible improve the shading and lighting. Also I think the wheels and tracks could use more texture and shading/lighting.

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Re: M24 tank

Postby brynn » Sat Feb 14, 2015 11:39 pm

I don't know anything about tanks or guns or jets or that kind of thing. So I can't give much advice. But I wonder if your original image is larger? Because imo, you won't be able to add too much more detail, at this size, and be able to see it.

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Re: M24 tank

Postby Lazur » Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:33 am

The top looks quite good but the bottom seems a bit off in consistency.
In my humble opinion the cast shadow is a bit too much and the wheels look cartoonish with those outlines.

It all depends on the context though, If this will be used in a game, maybe that outlined style would be better.

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Re: M24 tank

Postby toxigames » Sun Feb 15, 2015 6:28 am

Lazur URH wrote:The top looks quite good but the bottom seems a bit off in consistency.
In my humble opinion the cast shadow is a bit too much and the wheels look cartoonish with those outlines.

It all depends on the context though, If this will be used in a game, maybe that outlined style would be better.


I am thinking about using it in a game but I feel especially the wheels and the shadow part needs more work.
Thanks for the advice! :)


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