Load Your Locker

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mrap
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Load Your Locker

Postby mrap » Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:44 am

A poster that I've been hired to do for a project involving discreet food donations into kids lockers. Any Suggestions? I'm near finished.

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Pureon
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Re: Load Your Locker

Postby Pureon » Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:19 am

I like the rounded box characters and the drips :D

Make sure the green text to the top-left is still legible when printed.

Try not to hide the locker photo completely behind the illustrations, any more and it wouldn't be imediatlely obvious what it is.

Hope this helps...

SureWhyNot
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Re: Load Your Locker

Postby SureWhyNot » Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:07 am

It looks like that font leaves a bit too much space after M's. Look at "Home" and "Gmail". (Also after the W in "we can help"). You may want to alter the kerning a bit. Or maybe I'm just being picky.


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